1. What will be the subject of your profile essay? What place will you profile?
Red Rock Canyon
2. What will be the dominant impression your essay will evoke?
2. What will be the dominant impression your essay will evoke?
when i visit red rock canyon with some friend to go barbeque
3. What narrative perspective will you choose?
3. What narrative perspective will you choose?
first and third
First-person ("I" or "we")? The first-person perspective provides a sense of intimacy.
Second-person ("you")? The second-person perspective provides a sense of immediacy.
Third-person ("he," "she," "it," "they")? The third-person perspective provides a sense of objectivity.
Each perspective is acceptable, but each perspective will shape the essay in a different way. Regardless of the perspective you choose, be consistent.
Reread the "Profile" attachment on Blackboard for clarification with the next questions.
4. What will be your "Beginning"?
First-person ("I" or "we")? The first-person perspective provides a sense of intimacy.
Second-person ("you")? The second-person perspective provides a sense of immediacy.
Third-person ("he," "she," "it," "they")? The third-person perspective provides a sense of objectivity.
Each perspective is acceptable, but each perspective will shape the essay in a different way. Regardless of the perspective you choose, be consistent.
Reread the "Profile" attachment on Blackboard for clarification with the next questions.
4. What will be your "Beginning"?
explaining my surroundings and how i felt about the park, i explain it very well in the thesis statement of my intro
5. How will you structure your "Middle"?
5. How will you structure your "Middle"?
each body paragraph goes in vivid detail how i felt and why people should go check it out right away.
6. What will you use in your "Conclusion"?
6. What will you use in your "Conclusion"?
give closing statement and explain why people should go visit it themselves.
7. How will you use dialogue?
7. How will you use dialogue?
i used vivid dialogues and went in detail how i felt and what i saw throughout the park
8. What "Characters" will your essay feature?
8. What "Characters" will your essay feature?
One of my friends i went with name jesus pulido
9. What "Illuminating Details and Anecdotes" will you use?
9. What "Illuminating Details and Anecdotes" will you use?
i will illuminating to details to share how i felt and my first experience there with friends.
10. How will you use all (or most of) the senses? What visual images will you use? What auditory images? What tactile images? What gustatory images (tastes)? What olfactory images (smells)?
10. How will you use all (or most of) the senses? What visual images will you use? What auditory images? What tactile images? What gustatory images (tastes)? What olfactory images (smells)?
i use mostly visual images to explain my thoughts and what i saw
11. What verb tense will you use? Past tense? Present tense?
11. What verb tense will you use? Past tense? Present tense?
present
Aman,
ReplyDeleteI love Red Rock Canyon!
Work on a stronger dominant impression. What is the main idea you want to convey about Red Rock Canyon? That it's the perfect place to "get away"? That it's a place for friendship? That it's a place to commune with nature? Figure out what Red Rock Canyon means to you; that will be your dominant impression.
I'm a little unclear as to how you will structure your body paragraphs. This isn't an argumentative essay, so you shouldn't structure the paragraphs around supporting arguments/reasons. Rather, look for some structure to your experience that you can use. It could be chronological (this happens first, this second), or spatial (this is the entrance, then the road goes further back), or thematic (wilderness, nature, the stars). Figure out a structure, and the essay will write itself (not really, but it will be easier to write).
thank u really appreciate the help :)
ReplyDeletethank u really appreciate the help :)
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