Assugnment # 12

1. What tone will you take with your essay? I will use an entertaining tone for this essay.
2. What narrative perspective will you use?  First-person? Second-person?  Third-person?  Will you switch between perspectives?  Why or why not? I plan on using first persona and go in detail with my feelings.keep it straight forward
3. What point-of-view will you use in your essay?Point of view of the main character
4. How much psychic distance will you create between you and your subject?The subject and I are very closely linked because its like a narration
5. How will you weave story and idea?  In other words, how will you shift between summary and dramatic narrative?First i will summarize and eventually catch the reader attention by providing examples and shifting it to dramatic narrative
6. How will you begin your essay? I will begin my essay with a opening statement that can be related to anyone in general which catches the readers attention right from the beginning

7. How will you structure your essay's middle? The middle will consist of different struggles and goes in visual details of the problem
8. How will you end your essay?The solution and explains how the character overcomes the problem throughout the essay.

Assignment # 11

For my essay the rhetorical modes i am going to use are Description, Narration, and Exemplification.


Description: i am going to provide many visual details which help the reader understand the lost feeling i am talking about in my essay.
Narration: I am going to use narration with Description together so my story is more descriptive and goes in much detail, I feel like these two modes will be the best for me and how i write and it will help me explain the lost feeling throughout my essay.
Exemplification: i am going to use example all throughout my essay to explain my points and feeling s to the reader. Examples help me expand my thoughts when i write and it makes the essay more interesting to read then boring because you can get the main concepts by paying attention to the examples. 

Assignment # 10

What does it mean to lose someone?

When i think of loosing i just think of my Grandparents because they are no longer with us because we lost them due to their deaths. Personally i am not  a big fan of the word lost, because its negative in every way its used. Lose someone can be best defined as just someone who was there who was very significant to you and is not there anymore for example deaths, relationships.

Assignment # 9

.5.        “You were the wind and I the sea.” (From “After Love” by Sara Teasdale

I choose this metaphor because the author is comparing the sea and wind to describe the relationship between men and women, one can not be one without the other. Without no wind there is no wave in the sea. Without Waves the sea is just a lifeless body of water. His hidden message in this quote is clearly talking about teamwork and how people cooperate. He might also be talking about his past relation ship because how deeply he was affected by it and is trying to say how good they were together.

Assignment number #8

my best line from my Essay # 2

 The tedious hour and a half drive adds to the exquisiteness that the Red Rock Canyon State Park delivers as the drive there sets one up to expect something mundane, but from a turn of a corner one is struck with a breath-taking view of cultivated beauty.

Assignment number 7

1.  What will be the subject of your profile essay?  What place will you profile?

Red Rock Canyon
2.  What will be the dominant impression your essay will evoke?

when i visit red rock canyon with some friend to go barbeque
3.  What narrative perspective will you choose?  

first and third
First-person ("I" or "we")? The first-person perspective provides a sense of intimacy.
Second-person ("you")? The second-person perspective provides a sense of immediacy.
Third-person ("he," "she," "it," "they")?  The third-person perspective provides a sense of objectivity.
Each perspective is acceptable, but each perspective will shape the essay in a different way.  Regardless of the perspective you choose, be consistent.
Reread the "Profile" attachment on Blackboard for clarification with the next questions.
4.  What will be your "Beginning"?

explaining my surroundings and how i felt about the park, i explain it very well in the thesis statement of my intro
5.  How will you structure your "Middle"?

each body paragraph goes in vivid detail how i felt and why people should go check it out right away.
6.  What will you use in your "Conclusion"?

give closing statement and explain why people should go visit it themselves.
7.  How will you use dialogue?

i used vivid dialogues and went in detail how i felt and what i saw throughout the park
8.  What "Characters" will your essay feature?

One of my friends i went with name jesus pulido
9.  What "Illuminating Details and Anecdotes" will you use?

i will illuminating to details to share how i felt and my first experience there with friends.
10.  How will you use all (or most of) the senses?  What visual images will you use?  What auditory images?  What tactile images?  What gustatory images (tastes)?  What olfactory images (smells)?

i use mostly visual images to explain my thoughts and what i saw
11. What verb tense will you use?  Past tense?  Present tense?

present

Assignment # 6- profile: Eliza Grace, The Mohave, and Me

I read the profile essay" Eliza Grace, The Mohave, and Me"  by Guy Martin. This essay is a describing death valley and how it feels in a lot of details by the author. Guy martin gives many vivid details throughout the entire essay. The author uses this technique very well and goes in very specific detail which makes the reader feel like he is there with him. He also gives very good information and goes in depth. For example when he is talking about snakes , he even talks bout in depth how poisonous they are and also gives a good comparison of them. This essay was very interesting and the author had me hooked throughout the whole essay. His vivid details made the essay  easy for me to understand. I think i am going to use a lot of vivid images in my next essay because it makes it easier for the reader to know what i am going to be talking about.